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Beautiful Leech by carriezona Beautiful Leech by carriezona
Whoever you may be,
be as blood flowing
to a bleeding answer.

I am a wound
who lives on blood
like a beautiful leech.

...
Nietzsche, of course.
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:iconikmal13:
Ikmal13 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
REAlly Cool
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This has been featured in mu journal!

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:iconpersondev:
PersonDev Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
It's amazing how you can see these things.
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:iconfluffibunni213:
fluffibunni213 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Student General Artist
Intense. Good job. :)
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ArturKarlov Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Student
this is best poetry i've seen here on da so far.
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Calliethecat Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011  Student Writer
my great grandma gave me the book heidi :heart:
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:iconcurlyhairedkid:
curlyhairedkid Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011
I love your work :) I just finished my first found poem on a page from Heidi today!
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Gironimo Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really love tis work :aww: I think it must be hard to find fitting words of a poem in an already written work ;)
it has something really captivating to me and I have to read it over and oder again :XD:
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:iconmurdershannon:
MurderShannon Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2011
You are simply AMAZING.
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011   General Artist
hahaa awwwh thank you dear.
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:iconvincegotera:
vincegotera Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011
You have a wonderful double knack: finding a cool poem in the mass of words and then making them jump out with such cool flowy shapes. Brava!
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011   General Artist
I like flow.. lol
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:iconsandmanda:
sandmanda Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
This is beautiful.
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:iconjustbeforethedawn:
JustBeforeTheDawn Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
Wow. I like this one a lot... o_o
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:icontorrenklaimer:
TorrenKlaimer Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I'm reading him now.
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011   General Artist
Isn't it wonderful?
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:iconsurroundedbytrees:
SurroundedByTrees Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing.
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:iconkersenwiek:
kersenwiek Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2011
Beautiful poem :heart:
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:iconrider-on-the-storm:
rider-on-the-storm Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011
thus spoke zarathustra
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011   General Artist
indeed
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:iconrider-on-the-storm:
rider-on-the-storm Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2011
that is a good read
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:icongeometricfish:
geometricfish Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011
What book is this from I want to read it.
This is Poetically beautiful, and creative. And also verrryyyy alluring to the artistic eye. I really appreciate this.
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:iconmysongislaughter:
MySongIsLaughter Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That's a very intereting and beautiful poem
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011   General Artist
Thank you.
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:iconmysongislaughter:
MySongIsLaughter Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome
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strawberrypower009 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011
That's so cool... (for lack of better words)
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011   General Artist
hahaha, thank you!
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:iconstrawberrypower009:
strawberrypower009 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2011
You're welcome!
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Kimlu1 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Student Writer
Wonderful. I love this. it is amazing. Great idea.
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n00brevolution Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Heh, there's no full stop at the end... Nevertheless, it's very smart and interesting.
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timeraider Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I enjoyed the second stanza more than the first. Well, line 3 was the detractor, really. I don't think I followed the metaphor with "answer".
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Heilock Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Student General Artist
What you did there.
I see it.
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011   General Artist
I love Futurama. Thank you.
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:iconmillzey:
Millzey Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011   Writer
stop being so cool with your amazing skills. your making people jealous.
...that doesnt include me. XDDD
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011   General Artist
ahahahah you are wonderful. thank you.
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:iconmillzey:
Millzey Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011   Writer
i try XDDD anytime!
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:iconpoulpehibou:
PoulpeHibou Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
How to transform Nietsche into some Linkin Park...
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:icong-mads:
G-Mads Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
LOL! Oh my god, laughing forever
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:icontetsuko-evans:
tetsuko-evans Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Wonderful.... ˇYou earn my love!
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Tyranous-King Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thats cool like secret code
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:icontyranous-king:
Tyranous-King Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thats cool like secret code
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kathythepirate Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
oh cool
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brittymon37 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
brilliant!
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:iconzoakothegreat:
ZoakoTHEgreat Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Student Writer
brilliant! :iconlachoirplz:
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rotten-peaches Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
I love this!
It's a brilliant use of a book I think
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:iconmonocledmiracleman:
MonocledMiracleMan Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
Also, beautiful.
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Baron-Cimetiere Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
I like the poems that come out of these things but I always cringe when I see a book defaced.
I get flashes of Nazi's burning books in my brain.
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notepadgirl Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
Yeah, I have that kneejerk too.=) even when they use it for art, I wanna pat the book.XD "Okay, there, there".=P
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Baron-Cimetiere Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011
I know right? lol
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:iconmonocledmiracleman:
MonocledMiracleMan Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
It's not being defaced- it's being rediscovered. If no one is reading a book, it's of no use, and turning it into something new gives it meaning again.
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