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Let's Make a Deal by carriezona Let's Make a Deal by carriezona
One night,
I went to him
(the devil)
and I offered
my soul.
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:iconfezzypumpkin:
FezzyPumpkin Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
I sold my soul to the devil but I didn't get no pay, I just did it because he said it would be a good experience.
Ickbbar: Really?
Yeah but then he had to give it back. 
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That1PersonYouForgot Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Great job, love it~
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zombiexpicturexshow Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really fucking deep. I love it. <3
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mreid973 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2010
Fun. Whimsical with the flames and somewhat sad considering the story of Heloise & Abelard. I did not realize a soul could be bourgeois.
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010   General Artist
Thank you. I thought it was all quite proper.
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Threns-Sanity Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I meant to comment on this when I fav'd but forgot until now. Whoops. XD
If I ever get my hands on a book I can bring myself to write in I would love to do this to every page and like, make an actual story out of it. It's such an interesting idea and I love that sentance you managed to get out of it, it must have taken forever to find a good page. 8U
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TigerloverM Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I absoultly love your poetry. This one is very creative. Great job :)
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010   General Artist
hehe, I liked this one too. Thanks for looking through it all!
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TigerloverM Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome :)
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NicholeXNecrophile Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
I've seen a few others of these you made and I find them interesting :D
Awesomeness.
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010   General Artist
Oh good! I'm glad you like them. You should check out #DailyPoetics for more!
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:iconyourdeadfriend:
yourdeadfriend Featured By Owner May 29, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I love this kind of poetry. I'm really inclined to try it myself, but I feel like I'm copying you.
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner May 29, 2010   General Artist
Not at all! There is a whooole group dedicated to such a thing. Try it, then submit it here: #DailyPoetics it's too much fun not to.
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yourdeadfriend Featured By Owner May 29, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Groovy!
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Poptart-Master Featured By Owner May 4, 2010
very creative and very awesome :3
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:iconplmethvin:
plmethvin Featured By Owner May 12, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
L DOES RULE THE WORLD! of animes...
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:iconpoptart-master:
Poptart-Master Featured By Owner May 13, 2010
yes, yes he does. :D
:iconearthplz:
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner May 4, 2010   General Artist
Thanks for the looky!!
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:iconpoptart-master:
Poptart-Master Featured By Owner May 4, 2010
haha ur very welcome! ^_^
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initially-tag Featured By Owner May 3, 2010
I love this concept.
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   General Artist
Thank you!!! If you like "found poetry", as it is sometimes called, please check out a group dedicated to such a thing; #DailyPoetics ! And thanks again!
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Vamp7 Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
ha ha love it!
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   General Artist
Thank you!!! please check #DailyPoetics ! ..If you like that type of thing.
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Inkpaws Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
Ahhhahaha xD
Great story too >.>
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Howlingwolf26 Featured By Owner May 2, 2010  Student Filmographer
That's very strange that you gt that pointed out in a book. If that was me I would't have caught that. Nice job. :nod:
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carriezona Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   General Artist
Thank you!!! If you like "found poetry", as it is sometimes called, please check out a group dedicated to such a thing; #DailyPoetics !
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TheIconArtist Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
Woah, that really just spoke to me... Not in a good way. I kinda just saw real Pain and Horror just then... But creative, deep, it show's how real religon IS.
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   General Artist
Thank you!
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:icontheiconartist:
TheIconArtist Featured By Owner May 3, 2010
No problem ;) You're very tallented!
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CustomCookie Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
Good idea, nice execution.
I sure hope the book belongs to you :D

Is it significant that the book is about Abelard and Heloise?
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   General Artist
Haha... It was actually a torn book I was about to throw out, so I made something better out of it.

The book is called "French Lovers" but that is of no consequence, it may as well have been any old book.

Thanks!!!
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WaterproofWarlock Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
that is deep i like it
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yesterdayzchild Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
Oh, wow! This is SO super-creative; I love it! :clap:
And I love the put-together poem, too! :heart:
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   General Artist
Thank you!! If you like, you should visit #DailyPoetics .. they have some lovely found poetry there.
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yesterdayzchild Featured By Owner May 3, 2010
Welcome!

Ooh, awesome! It's a really interesting medium and I'll definitely visit, thank you!
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LaNorthWay Featured By Owner May 2, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, that's really creative! =D Cool! :+fav:
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painofaninnocent Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
Simple, but very clever. I love the little flames. ^_^
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PanicAtTheHatter Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
Omg! Thats really good XD im so jealous
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner May 3, 2010   General Artist
Haha... well thank you very much.
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PanicAtTheHatter Featured By Owner May 3, 2010
XD no problem
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schlockhausen Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
the devil in parenthesis! nice!
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:iconlilain:
Lilain Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
This is really cool!
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MagicalGreenPen Featured By Owner May 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Really cool idea, I like the way you've done. Plus the fires are pretty. (:
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Michubab Featured By Owner May 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is pretty cool :D I really like it! I've never seen anything like this, original idea~~ and very interesting :D
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner May 2, 2010   General Artist
Thank you!! If you like this 'found poetry' you might check out a group dedicated to this sort of thing, #DailyPoetics !! One love.
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:iconmichubab:
Michubab Featured By Owner May 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
no problems, and thanks for telling me about the group :D I'll check it out right away!!
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Joe-Maccer Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
And what did you get in return? ;)
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner May 2, 2010   General Artist
Hehe... thank you for looking! And for your constant support!
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:iconjoe-maccer:
Joe-Maccer Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
Always a pleasure! :highfive:
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shaiyaslight Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
Very simple and straightforward, but still interesting.
I also adore your pretty fires.
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