With just another inch of it,
let loose, unwound
slack from secret stashes:
There might have been enough
sisal rope or
to tie to you
to keep you close
to form into a noose
(so you might hang around this time.)
This is quite lovely and clever. It really flows, I like it.
i absolutely love this! it's so dark and so funny all at the same time
Marvelous...I adore the darkness in this, lol
The last part is chilling! Rope has so many uses, no? (;
You humor is gold. XD
Nice hope you can like mine as well
This is absolutely beautiful: I love how you use half rhymes, assonance, alliteration etc to make something as twisting and sinuous as rope. Fantastic job.
You always have the most lovely things to say.. thank you, my deal. This one is very close to me.
whoa thats deep