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With just another inch of it,
let loose, unwound
slack from secret stashes:

There might have been enough
sisal rope or
twisting twine,
to tie to you
to keep you close

or else,
to form into a noose
(so you might hang around this time.)
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HakusTears Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
This is quite lovely and clever. It really flows, I like it.
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ambivalentart Featured By Owner May 23, 2011
i absolutely love this! it's so dark and so funny all at the same time
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Mivala Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Marvelous...I adore the darkness in this, lol
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nytag Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
The last part is chilling! Rope has so many uses, no? (;
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carriezona Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011   General Artist
haha, it certainly does. Thanks for the peek, love.
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harmonicaaa Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You humor is gold. XD
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carriezona Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011   General Artist
haha thanks dearest
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keepyking Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011
Nice hope you can like mine as well
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EyesLikeAbsinthe Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is absolutely beautiful: I love how you use half rhymes, assonance, alliteration etc to make something as twisting and sinuous as rope. Fantastic job.
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carriezona Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011   General Artist
You always have the most lovely things to say.. thank you, my deal. This one is very close to me.
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