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Seeking, he would see by carriezona Seeking, he would see by carriezona
We go seeking,
looking for conscious meaning.

I doubt if there are any who know it, knowingly.

I thought to myself;

(he would
he would!
would be
would be!)

He would see -
he is so a part of the cosmos,
in me.
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thefallingbird Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
amazing
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LadyDameDoctorBritt Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
This is definitely my favourite so far. Wowowowow <3
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SpinningStarshine Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Student General Artist
I'm such a big fan of well-placed repetition (4th stanza) and not-quite-redundancies ("...any who know it, knowingly"). :heart: And as someone else mentioned, the rhythm is just right.
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carriezona Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011   General Artist
Awh, you are too too kind.
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crozzbonez1 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010
That one is taking me apart. I love it
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:iconcarriezona:
carriezona Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010   General Artist
hehe... I love that phrasing. Thanks so much.
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szmermel Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
amazing!
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carriezona Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2010   General Artist
Thanks!!
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Katuron Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010
Have I ever told you how amazing it is that you consistently create thing like these? friggin' epic, seriously :D
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carriezona Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010   General Artist
Awh, thanks so much. I feel like they're just constantly so aching to be found.
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